They seem okay to me, though "would" is being used as a conditional and not as the "polite would" of "I would like to dance with you". “Shivers” is a transcendent trance track that showcases Armin van Buuren’s mastery of the genre. The haunting vocals, driving beats, and atmospheric https://youtu.be/T0zWXvhEQwo?si=wNc6ihu97ShtIl7u